I haven’t read this series, so I wasn’t familiar with the hero and heroine, May and Evan, but they’ve recently tied the knot and Evan has a little surprise for his wife.  He will give her the fantasy she’s always had FOR ONE NIGHT ONLY.  So he brings in Rome to be a third.  And of course, not just will she get a menage, but these guys are both Doms.

So the setup was great, especially for a hot short story.  I liked the characters individually a lot, there was a lot of build up and then…it didn’t blow me away.  I don’t know if I would’ve felt different having read the previous book, however I don’t think it was a connection problem for me.  It was just that the sex scenes were just ok.

In a short story of only 54 pages centering around Doms and sex I guess I had higher expectations from it.  Evan and Rome were just ok at it. *shrugs*

Nonetheless, I will go back and read the rest of the series and get to know the Harmless characters.


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  1. I have this, but haven’t read yet. I have another one on my Kindle I’ve been trying to finish and since it’s a later one as well, I feel like I’m missing something, but I like what I’ve read enough to go back when I get some time.

  2. Anticipating and expectation built up for a good story and then to have it fall flat- yikes!

    I haven’t read this series yet, but I’ve heard good things about Melissa Schroeder.

    Thanks for sharing your review!

  3. I haven’t read this series yet but I got the first in the series when it was free on Amazon…looking froward to reading them all!