In my hopes of learning more and adding depth to Ethanโ€™s character, I got a one-dimensional storyline that lacked an emotional draw. ~ Under the Covers

In the second book of the Blackstone Affair, ALL IN takes a different approach, so different that it felt like a totally different series in terms of writing style. This book is from Ethanโ€™s POV and it turned out to be vastly different than my expectations. From the first book, I took away several things: I thought Ethan was sexy and dominant. I thought getting Ethanโ€™s POV would mean readers would get a deeper insight into his mind and his own personal struggles. And I thought that this book would make me love him more.

Getting to read Ethanโ€™s POV changed how I saw him. He seemed a little too whiny in the beginning, pining for Brynne until he seemed wholly consumed by it and nothing else. While romantic, it also felt a little too forced because Brynne and Ethan fall in love so quickly in the first book that the challenges they are facing now seem too soon and too unrealistic for me to really invest in it fully. While I could push that aside for the time being as I continued to read, there was another thing that disappointed me about this book.

I thought we would get greater insight into Ethanโ€™s mind. While Miller does provide readers with a series of flashbacks that are a twisted combination of Brynne and Ethanโ€™s current predicaments and Ethanโ€™s traumatic experiences from his time in the military, I didnโ€™t get that emotional pull that I got from the first book. I totally missed the charismatic and dominant side of Ethan and got annoyed by the constant phrasing of โ€œmy girlโ€ as if he was a teenage boy, staking claim on his first love. In my hopes of learning more and adding depth to Ethanโ€™s character, I got a one-dimensional storyline that lacked an emotional draw.

I had hoped for something more edgy and dark. While the suspense aspect of the book wasnโ€™t bad, I kept thinking how different this book felt to me as I had just jumped from reading book one, NAKED straight into this one. Iโ€™ll be jumping into book three, EYES WIDE OPEN and doing exactly that, keeping an open mind, hoping this one floors me as it did the first book.

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  1. This review is slightly discouraging for me to read the series. While I love my share of steamy, dark romances when it comes to switch POV’s I’m a bit wary because of the similarities between both books but also I am fearful I’ll dislike the characters. It seems to be Ethan became less “attractive” as a character in, “All In”. I was really pumped about these book once I saw the series and I’ll probably still read the to see what everyone is gushing about, but I’ll keep in mind your honest thoughts about it so I don’t psyche myself up and end up hating this book.

    Thanks for a great review Ann! ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Hey Jackie!

      I was a little disappointed in this one. Ethan’s character just seemed so different than he did in the previous book, which I really enjoyed reading. After the cliffhanger ending in NAKED, I jumped straight into this one so that’s why I felt the differences were so very distinctive to me. I’m jumping into the last book next so my fingers are crossed that I love that one again!

      Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!
      xo

  2. I just read this entire series myself- and felt very similar, very unfortunately, about all 3 installments. The 3rd book has more plot in it than the 1st 2, but I was very disappointed since the series had so much potential with such rich characters to start. I am glad I was not alone with my opinion.

  3. I have read only the first book in this series,and honestly I wasn’t impressed with the story,you get a feeling that the book was written because that moment is moment when erotic books have their high point.

    The answer of the question is : Chris Merit ๐Ÿ˜€ from Inside Out Series ๐Ÿ™‚

    Thanks for the review Ann ๐Ÿ™‚